OCR Advanced Portfolio In Media Studies H540
Wednesday, 15 January 2014
Friday, 10 January 2014
Evaluation Q3 - What have you learned from your audience feedback?
During the making of my music video and during the ancillary tasks overall we needed to get audience feedback, the thoughts from our target audiences as well as people who are not involved in that category.
To begin with, right at the beginning of our coursework we constructed interviews with people who would fit into the category of our target audience as well as people who were not in this category. We asked questions to our audience about the kind of music video they would like to see, what it would involve, what sort of characters they like, we showed them some examples of the kind of themes we were focusing on for our music video and they had the option to choose which sort of direction they would like us to head in with our video. The people we interviewed were 3 people from the 17 - 18 age group and the other group of three males and two females was in the age range of 14 - 15, all there occupations were students. The questions asked were :-
What are your views on alternative rock music?
We then showed them 3 music videos..
- Narrative - Coldplay 'The Scientist'
- Performance - Foo Fighter 'The Pretender'
- Concept based - Kings Of Leon - Radioactive
And which one they preferred...
Our final question was what they thought to our song choice of Imagine Dragons 'On Top Of The World'...
The feedback we got back from this was generally good and positive, in general the attitude towards Alternative Rock music was quite underestimated as most of the students we asked didn't really listen to much of it, or would choose not to if they had the option. The preferred video out of the three by vast majority was Foo Fighters 'The Pretender' - they preferred this because it was more outgoing and intimate with the song and they all seemed to like the song. In terms of our Imagine Dragons song which we were using for our music video they all identified that it was a very uplifting and happy song, some people said they would listen to that song out of choice (mainly females) and some said that they probably wouldn't listen to that song out of choice! In terms of helping us with our music video etc. we did take these comments and opinions on board, however, we had an alternative interview/group discussion with our media class at the time and they disagreed, they predominately enjoy alternative rock music as well and differed in there answers to our focus group. In appreciation to this me and my group decided to go with what we felt was best, taking on board what feedback everyone had given us overall.
For our digipak and advert ideas, we did not produce a focus group video interviewing individuals to find out what progress we needed to make, instead, we had a media group discussion presenting our ideas and thoughts and welcomed any feedback and choices that anyone was willing to give. For our digipak, we presented two front cover ideas, a back page idea and any other snippets of ideas we had.

The first idea was similar to the idea we did choose for our digipak. We used the same symbol and font for the artist name, however we used a different background in this idea, we also used different pictures for each triangle outline in the symbol. The class did like this rendition of our first draft, this was the preferred idea for our front cover overall. It was described by some as 'illusional' which is exactly the kind of feel and theme we were looking for as this is extremely common in the alternative rock genre.
This originally was our idea for our back cover to the digipak, however, the class did like this idea they just thought it would look better maybe as an additional picture inside instead of on the back. This shot is from the music video where the cast are running up the hill, it is a very happy and iconic shot hence why we used this as a draft to associate our music video with our digipak.

The next idea was again for the front of our digipak, the class did like this idea and in the end it was between this draft and the first front cover draft with the triangle on that it was down to. Overall the majority of the class chose the first cover idea, a small minority chose this idea.
In terms of our advert feedback, we again did a class/group feedback session on what we thought of each others adverts and which one we preffered out of the optional drafts. After showing our drafts to the class with our three ideas, the class helped us choose the one that was best for our genre and what went well with the ideas from out digipak. Overall the group chose this draft as the best advert due to the look of it being the same as the digipak, also as the colour scheme is slightly different this challenges the brand identity of the front cover to the digipak. This formative feedback helped me and my group very much, not only were we very happy with our finishing piece but it meant that more than likely, our audience would like it too, as the feed back given to us was from the age range of 17 - 18 which is our perfect target audience for demographics and for this general genre of music.


After finalising our video, the next stage was to get feedback on its entirety from the general public, we each did this individually by posting our video on social networking sites, as one of the largest and most popular networks is Facebook, we each made a post on this promoting our video and asking for feedback and comments. As well as this the video is already on YouTube this enabled any viewers and YouTube channels to comment on our video, this is another chance to have feedback on what went well for us and audiences didn't like as much.
Not only did we use social networking sites to get our feedback, we also sent an email to staff to ask for their views and opinions on our video as well as everyone else's in the class, one teacher got back to us with constructive criticism as well as good points about the music video, other teachers just responded with that they like the videos etc. This teacher responded to our video with 'story seemed initially random, but then nice sense of intrigue built up with wanting to see where everyone was going, effects treatments kept it interesting.' This feedback was great for an understanding of what audiences think to our video, although this teacher does not fall in to our focus group/target audience her feedback was very welcoming and great to here, the confusion that she felt which she explained in her feedback is exactly the kind of feel we were trying to get as for this type of genre and with the reputation of Imagine Dragons former music videos, illusional and intriguing is the aim we were looking for.
This was our feedback....

In terms of what aspects of our products went down best with our audiences, the happy, uplifting feel of the video definitely was one of the most popular aspects, also the fact all the characters were different and individual, this made them easier for audiences to relate to. The intrigue of finding out where all the characters were going was also another aspect which audiences enjoyed watching. For the digipak the audience liked the symbolism for the brand identity using the triangle, also the illusional feel to the digipak and ofcourse the advert was liked by audiences.
In terms of what the audience didn't like so much, the confusion of where the characters were all going, and what was on Kain's phone in the video that made them all suddenly leave, that confused our audience according to our feedback, during feedback as well, our audience said they didn't like how long the curtain dance scene was, and that there wasn't long enough time to notice the fact the character had changed clothes.
Putting all this feedback together, if we were to do our music video again we would change the above aspects to please our audience, but to please ourselves, we would make our video more illusional...Imagine Dragons music videos are well known for being bizarre and different to other music videos and especially to other genres. For this we would make our music video a little bit less narrative and happy and more dark and bizarre.
To begin with, right at the beginning of our coursework we constructed interviews with people who would fit into the category of our target audience as well as people who were not in this category. We asked questions to our audience about the kind of music video they would like to see, what it would involve, what sort of characters they like, we showed them some examples of the kind of themes we were focusing on for our music video and they had the option to choose which sort of direction they would like us to head in with our video. The people we interviewed were 3 people from the 17 - 18 age group and the other group of three males and two females was in the age range of 14 - 15, all there occupations were students. The questions asked were :-
What are your views on alternative rock music?
We then showed them 3 music videos..
- Narrative - Coldplay 'The Scientist'
- Performance - Foo Fighter 'The Pretender'
- Concept based - Kings Of Leon - Radioactive
And which one they preferred...
Our final question was what they thought to our song choice of Imagine Dragons 'On Top Of The World'...
The feedback we got back from this was generally good and positive, in general the attitude towards Alternative Rock music was quite underestimated as most of the students we asked didn't really listen to much of it, or would choose not to if they had the option. The preferred video out of the three by vast majority was Foo Fighters 'The Pretender' - they preferred this because it was more outgoing and intimate with the song and they all seemed to like the song. In terms of our Imagine Dragons song which we were using for our music video they all identified that it was a very uplifting and happy song, some people said they would listen to that song out of choice (mainly females) and some said that they probably wouldn't listen to that song out of choice! In terms of helping us with our music video etc. we did take these comments and opinions on board, however, we had an alternative interview/group discussion with our media class at the time and they disagreed, they predominately enjoy alternative rock music as well and differed in there answers to our focus group. In appreciation to this me and my group decided to go with what we felt was best, taking on board what feedback everyone had given us overall.
For our digipak and advert ideas, we did not produce a focus group video interviewing individuals to find out what progress we needed to make, instead, we had a media group discussion presenting our ideas and thoughts and welcomed any feedback and choices that anyone was willing to give. For our digipak, we presented two front cover ideas, a back page idea and any other snippets of ideas we had.

The first idea was similar to the idea we did choose for our digipak. We used the same symbol and font for the artist name, however we used a different background in this idea, we also used different pictures for each triangle outline in the symbol. The class did like this rendition of our first draft, this was the preferred idea for our front cover overall. It was described by some as 'illusional' which is exactly the kind of feel and theme we were looking for as this is extremely common in the alternative rock genre.
This originally was our idea for our back cover to the digipak, however, the class did like this idea they just thought it would look better maybe as an additional picture inside instead of on the back. This shot is from the music video where the cast are running up the hill, it is a very happy and iconic shot hence why we used this as a draft to associate our music video with our digipak. 
The next idea was again for the front of our digipak, the class did like this idea and in the end it was between this draft and the first front cover draft with the triangle on that it was down to. Overall the majority of the class chose the first cover idea, a small minority chose this idea.
In terms of our advert feedback, we again did a class/group feedback session on what we thought of each others adverts and which one we preffered out of the optional drafts. After showing our drafts to the class with our three ideas, the class helped us choose the one that was best for our genre and what went well with the ideas from out digipak. Overall the group chose this draft as the best advert due to the look of it being the same as the digipak, also as the colour scheme is slightly different this challenges the brand identity of the front cover to the digipak. This formative feedback helped me and my group very much, not only were we very happy with our finishing piece but it meant that more than likely, our audience would like it too, as the feed back given to us was from the age range of 17 - 18 which is our perfect target audience for demographics and for this general genre of music.


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Not only did we use social networking sites to get our feedback, we also sent an email to staff to ask for their views and opinions on our video as well as everyone else's in the class, one teacher got back to us with constructive criticism as well as good points about the music video, other teachers just responded with that they like the videos etc. This teacher responded to our video with 'story seemed initially random, but then nice sense of intrigue built up with wanting to see where everyone was going, effects treatments kept it interesting.' This feedback was great for an understanding of what audiences think to our video, although this teacher does not fall in to our focus group/target audience her feedback was very welcoming and great to here, the confusion that she felt which she explained in her feedback is exactly the kind of feel we were trying to get as for this type of genre and with the reputation of Imagine Dragons former music videos, illusional and intriguing is the aim we were looking for.
This was our feedback....
In terms of what aspects of our products went down best with our audiences, the happy, uplifting feel of the video definitely was one of the most popular aspects, also the fact all the characters were different and individual, this made them easier for audiences to relate to. The intrigue of finding out where all the characters were going was also another aspect which audiences enjoyed watching. For the digipak the audience liked the symbolism for the brand identity using the triangle, also the illusional feel to the digipak and ofcourse the advert was liked by audiences.
In terms of what the audience didn't like so much, the confusion of where the characters were all going, and what was on Kain's phone in the video that made them all suddenly leave, that confused our audience according to our feedback, during feedback as well, our audience said they didn't like how long the curtain dance scene was, and that there wasn't long enough time to notice the fact the character had changed clothes.
Putting all this feedback together, if we were to do our music video again we would change the above aspects to please our audience, but to please ourselves, we would make our video more illusional...Imagine Dragons music videos are well known for being bizarre and different to other music videos and especially to other genres. For this we would make our music video a little bit less narrative and happy and more dark and bizarre.
Tuesday, 7 January 2014
Tuesday, 10 December 2013
Final Advert!!!
Our final advert is complete!!
This is our final advert, I am very happy with the outcome we have added everything that was suggested in our feedback from the class as well as using plenty of brand identity and recurring conventions for Alternative Rock!
Monday, 9 December 2013
The Making Of The Advert
In the making of our advert for Imagine Dragons 'On Top Of The World' we used photoshop to put all our ideas together and to create our piece. Our initial ideas when looking at several other Alternative Rock adverts was to use the same background as our album cover on our advert background. This is a common generic convention in alternative rock adverts.
We slightly changed the effects of the background to a darker lighting so that this made it different to the album and it also gave a nice contrast to the original. We copied a slightly more darkened section of the original picture and placed this at the bottom of the advert so that when we put our written information at the bottom it could be more clearly seen.
We added the symbol of the triangle, this is brand identity from our album/digipak, we used this on the advert so that it is a recognisable symbol to audiences and would represent the album it is covering. The best features of the triangle on top of the background is the contrast in illusional pictures, this is very stereotypical of Alternative Rock artist albums and adverts as they use very out there different ideas to attract an audience. It makes our advert and album unique and individual.
After this stage we then needed to add the other little details which adds up to make a successful and appealing advert. In the top right corner we added the 'Available on iTunes' logo, this gives an audience more choice as to where they can purchase the album and promotes iTunes for selling the album. In the bottom left corner we added the 'Interscope Records' logo, this needed to be there as it represents the artist record label company, as they are the ones that produce the album and the artist together. It also shows people the label so that they can research other bands and artists they might like from this label who might be of the same genre. In the bottom right hand corner of the advert we have added the QR code which leads audiences straight to the Imagine Dragons 'On Top Of The World' music video, this commonly appears on Alternative Rock adverts, this is a consistent convention to the genre, it also promotes the video for the song.
After adding the small details in the corners of our advert we then added the artist name, album name and release date. This is crucial to advertising so audiences know who the artist is, what they have produced (the album) and when it is available to buy and download. The font is the same as the album, this again makes it recognisable to audiences and represents the band/artist in a certain way, this is brand identity to the band so that seeing this font anywhere else you would connect it to the band. We have put the album name font the same as how it looks on the album to keep the similarities and the same font is used for 'OUT NOW' we underlined this so that it stands out more to audiences so that it might intrigue people to go out and buy the album literally 'now'.
I like the look of the font and the title being right underneath the triangle symbol, its effective, its individual and it fits the genre.
Finally after our class discussion feedback there was a joint decision to add something to the bottom of the advert. Most people suggested putting a review or rating on it so for this we have done both. We took a rating and review from Q magazine as Imagine Dragons appear in this magazine weekly. As the class suggested it does fill in the gap at the bottom and it makes the advert look more fuller, professional and promotional.
As well as that, the other feedback we got was that we needed some websites on there somewhere to promote the band and the record label, we have added both the artist website and the record label website to the top left corner this also fills a gap and adds just that bit more information that the advert needs!
We slightly changed the effects of the background to a darker lighting so that this made it different to the album and it also gave a nice contrast to the original. We copied a slightly more darkened section of the original picture and placed this at the bottom of the advert so that when we put our written information at the bottom it could be more clearly seen.
We added the symbol of the triangle, this is brand identity from our album/digipak, we used this on the advert so that it is a recognisable symbol to audiences and would represent the album it is covering. The best features of the triangle on top of the background is the contrast in illusional pictures, this is very stereotypical of Alternative Rock artist albums and adverts as they use very out there different ideas to attract an audience. It makes our advert and album unique and individual.
After this stage we then needed to add the other little details which adds up to make a successful and appealing advert. In the top right corner we added the 'Available on iTunes' logo, this gives an audience more choice as to where they can purchase the album and promotes iTunes for selling the album. In the bottom left corner we added the 'Interscope Records' logo, this needed to be there as it represents the artist record label company, as they are the ones that produce the album and the artist together. It also shows people the label so that they can research other bands and artists they might like from this label who might be of the same genre. In the bottom right hand corner of the advert we have added the QR code which leads audiences straight to the Imagine Dragons 'On Top Of The World' music video, this commonly appears on Alternative Rock adverts, this is a consistent convention to the genre, it also promotes the video for the song.
After adding the small details in the corners of our advert we then added the artist name, album name and release date. This is crucial to advertising so audiences know who the artist is, what they have produced (the album) and when it is available to buy and download. The font is the same as the album, this again makes it recognisable to audiences and represents the band/artist in a certain way, this is brand identity to the band so that seeing this font anywhere else you would connect it to the band. We have put the album name font the same as how it looks on the album to keep the similarities and the same font is used for 'OUT NOW' we underlined this so that it stands out more to audiences so that it might intrigue people to go out and buy the album literally 'now'.
I like the look of the font and the title being right underneath the triangle symbol, its effective, its individual and it fits the genre.
Finally after our class discussion feedback there was a joint decision to add something to the bottom of the advert. Most people suggested putting a review or rating on it so for this we have done both. We took a rating and review from Q magazine as Imagine Dragons appear in this magazine weekly. As the class suggested it does fill in the gap at the bottom and it makes the advert look more fuller, professional and promotional.
As well as that, the other feedback we got was that we needed some websites on there somewhere to promote the band and the record label, we have added both the artist website and the record label website to the top left corner this also fills a gap and adds just that bit more information that the advert needs!
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