This post is an A although change the title to make it clearer (i.e. it's student work) and also put it back to the early digipak days
Conventions of adverts is an A too - well done
Only things to improve are:
Editing updates - either lacking or very vague - see to that
Generic conventions of adverts - some spelling errors, also needs more genre specific analyses. For example, the fonts are mostly very big/bold, capital, written in white, but this is barely mentioned. What does this say about these artists/this genre? What about artist appearance (clothes/gestures), colours, logos - etc. They all say something about the genre (especially if they're reoccurring). That's a low A/high B.
Make those minor changes, update some of the earlier posts that are below your target grade and I can give it a final mark - deadline this week.
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ReplyDeleteThis post is an A although change the title to make it clearer (i.e. it's student work) and also put it back to the early digipak days
Conventions of adverts is an A too - well done
Only things to improve are:
Editing updates - either lacking or very vague - see to that
Generic conventions of adverts - some spelling errors, also needs more genre specific analyses. For example, the fonts are mostly very big/bold, capital, written in white, but this is barely mentioned. What does this say about these artists/this genre? What about artist appearance (clothes/gestures), colours, logos - etc. They all say something about the genre (especially if they're reoccurring). That's a low A/high B.
Make those minor changes, update some of the earlier posts that are below your target grade and I can give it a final mark - deadline this week.