The first few chunks of text don't do justice to your ability. There are quite a few overly-long sentences, spelling mistakes, grammar, etc. Re-read through (e.g. this conventions', 'videon' - also the first time you write 'anciallry' - take it out.
Video: conventions used - need more than one real example (same with developed conventions). Have at least 2 or 3 to compare and contrast.
You talk about things like filters, cam shots and edits (good) but don't link to any real texts to compare/prove your point. What other vids use POV shots, or colour filters, for example. Also, WHY do you think they/you use/d those techniques?
Mise-en-scene? Themes? Areas that could be discussed more.
Digipak - conventions challenged - text is out of place.
Otherwise good but needs the above improvements for an A.
The first few chunks of text don't do justice to your ability. There are quite a few overly-long sentences, spelling mistakes, grammar, etc. Re-read through (e.g. this conventions', 'videon' - also the first time you write 'anciallry' - take it out.
ReplyDeleteVideo: conventions used - need more than one real example (same with developed conventions). Have at least 2 or 3 to compare and contrast.
You talk about things like filters, cam shots and edits (good) but don't link to any real texts to compare/prove your point. What other vids use POV shots, or colour filters, for example. Also, WHY do you think they/you use/d those techniques?
Mise-en-scene? Themes? Areas that could be discussed more.
Digipak - conventions challenged - text is out of place.
Otherwise good but needs the above improvements for an A.
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